Final Moments Comments
Sitting with you
Watching you, helpless;
Sleep is engulfing you
What more can I do, helpless?
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Very touching poem. A strong image of a mother and her child together yet apart. I am reminded of sitting between the walls of a house while the spirit keeps travelling abroad. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us.
Final moments is a heart-touching poem. When I read this poem, I felt the imagery of death. There is a positive note in the poem towards the end of the poem where the poetess says Let us pretend.............
Such a beautiful poem. My heart was with you from the begining to the very end of each verse. Lovely write.
I agree with Dave and Eric, a wonderful poem. If you have some time, read Wendy Thopliss works. She is also from the united kingdom and a very good poet. She is a wonderful person to get to know.
your presence, your gift... letting go with love, love will always remain!
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7/27/2025 9:59:13 PM # 1.0.0
This one leaves my heart throbbing with compassion. Sad poem, but good write nonetheless!