Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Final Moments Comments

Rating: 5.0

tears run down your face
blood runs down your arm
the knife drops to the floor
air is at it's closure
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Carrie Sprouse
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Silence Dogood 12 October 2008

A great description of final moments

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Tom Balch 20 August 2008

Well its got to be 10+

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Sarah Abdullah 20 August 2008

Simply Great I loved how Epressive the poem is Thx for sharing

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Carrie Sprouse

Carrie Sprouse

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