Wednesday, July 30, 2014

Final Moment Comments

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Sitting high above the ground, looking up and around, seeing
and sharing the beauty manifested in natural delight.

Tops of trees near or beneath me, giving different perspectives
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 24 September 2015

I have read poems of suffering this evening but the last line of this one is a breath of the Spirit redeeming the time. The fifth stanza with the prominence of the color blue caps the previous lovely imagery in stanzas 1-4. And why not celebrate old age? We must all endure it, no choice - it's fate. So surprise the angels who grieve for us, show them we are really happy to embrace this last stage of our lives of change and then join them in a region of permanent delight.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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