Saturday, March 11, 2017

Final Itinerary! ! ! Comments

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Itinerary is too much crowded
Errant thoughts make it vulnerable
I wish to walk alone
Clumsy flowers on my deathbed smell badly
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Kezia Kezia
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Rajnish Manga 28 March 2017

We don't have any idea about what has prompted the poet to write such a heart touching poem. Whatever, the poem has succeeded in conveying a man's willingness and urgency to embrace death. ]]] I want to fly weightless / No disturbance of breath

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Kezia Kezia 28 March 2017

usually ideas are borrowed from our society on high rate of interest. thanks sir for your kind comment.

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Indira Renganathan 12 March 2017

Very honest words spoken in real natural terms......congratulations- 10

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Kezia Kezia 12 March 2017

thank you so much mam for appreciation

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Rajnish Manga 12 March 2017

This seems so real- honest invitation to death for the sake of getting eternal peace. Thanks. I want extreme peace Let me face the real music of death Soul is ready to move out of cage...

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Kezia Kezia 12 March 2017

thank you for liking it

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