Friday, March 28, 2008

Final Hour Comments

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how many falling
leaves of faded summer
glories crackling under
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Ravi A 24 April 2009

A nice composition. The symbolism it thought provoking.

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 April 2008

leave these leaves, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , nice write

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WILLIAM SIENES III 28 March 2008

Love this one, Nomi, especially 'i have defeated you/ with a breath of a child'.

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