Thursday, September 29, 2011

Final Goodbye Comments

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I watch you beckon me
Over to you with tears,
Leaving my eyes barren
Of any apparent happiness.
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Stefanie Fontker
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Declan O Reilly 30 September 2011

You simply evoke so much emotion in and from your verse. I have never seen such passion expressed in so few words. You have what every aspiring poet yearns for, and that is honesty in your craft. I am never sure if what I am reading is reality or fantasy and because of that, this is where your true strength lies. Outstanding poem.

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