Sunday, March 27, 2016

Final Goodby Comments

Rating: 5.0

Perhaps,

One day, in the late Fall
I will drive my truck
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Darwin Henry Beuning
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Kim Barney 25 July 2021

I guess you will have to change your plans, Hank, as you no longer have your truck!

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Michael Walker 22 May 2019

I must look up 'base of the Wasatch' in my atlas. A witty mention of Whiskey brands. I never miss church on Easter Sunday either. A striking last line to this poem.

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Michael, Thanks for the comment! ! My wife and I have lived here in our Kaysville home for 32 years. I enjoy seeing the Wasatch mountains each day out of our bay window.

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Michael Walker 26 October 2016

The three friends you name gives a touch of lighthearted humour. (They were my friends once, but not now) . A contrast with reaching the mountaintop and God's love. Appropriate for Easter Sunday.

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Kim Barney 28 March 2016

Don't forget your other friend, Bud. His last name is either Wiser or Weiser or Wizer. I like the concept here, although I don't have any of the same friends that you do. My dad always said that was the way he wanted to go: just walk up into the mountains and disappear to spare his family the burial expenses. Of course, it didn't happen that way.

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Darwin Henry Beuning

Darwin Henry Beuning

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