Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Final Glory Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the first blade of grass
Rests a frosty little lass,
A delicate cold beauty
Bound by one last winter duty;
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Smoky Hoss
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Joseph Anderson 05 May 2012

Beauty comes in small packages-A great, little poem withmuch imagery

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Constance K Yost 03 April 2012

I love this sweet little proof of your great talent! Constance

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 20 March 2012

I like the poem for its vivid portrait is a last snow flake, and the blade of grass on which it lay. It amazing how poets like you can see beyond the smallest things of nature and create a poetic wonder from it.

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Juan Olivarez 09 March 2012

I absolutely love it, so much in so little. Great rhyming scheme Smoky.

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Eric Cockrell 06 March 2012

beautiful, well done!

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Valerie Dohren 06 March 2012

Love this little verse, really beautiful - food for the imagination.

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