Thursday, September 15, 2011

Final Farewell Comments

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My final farewell is written in verse,
I'll soon be in that dark, sombre hearse,
The life within me drained as a bath,
I'm heading north, on my final path.
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Daniel Sims
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Amber Marie 19 September 2011

i like this one. Sad but expressive. I have to say, though, it is a little depressing, but its a marvilous poem, indeed. I really liked it although considering the emotions within it. :)

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Gold Trybes 15 September 2011

Very deep..I hope u find comfort in the fact that u had somone to live for...Whatever you situation is, i say to you, its never too late to hope. Whatever your convictions are, remember that there are answers if only you dare search Best wishes..

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