Final Farewell Comments

" The body was heavy as the soul has left. " when a part of the whole has left, the rest should be lighter. But, though the fact remains what you said, the juxtaposing of facts makes poetry. Nice

The body was heavy as the soul has left... fine description with a great feeling of sadness.. and the soul body relationship at the end....... thankyou dear poet. tony

An extremely poignant account. Death leaves a void and a trail of sadness.

It's a very insightful piece of poetry! The last two stanzas made me analyze the powerful expression! Thanks for sharing.....10

world of sorrows, good one