Monday, January 26, 2009

Final Fall Comments

Rating: 4.8

You want to be
All that I need
Your soft, sad words
They plant the seed
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Joan Hart
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J. P. Dullahan 30 January 2009

I like this poem very much. The way you sustain the conflict between the feelings of joy at hopes being raised and the fear of them being dashed throughout the poem is superbly well done. Great writing - I loved it.

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