Final Door....... Comments

Scattered images knit together in a thread which can be interpreted in more than one way! An allusive poem, I suppose!

Horse and carriage poems are the best kind. Funeral/weddings, endings/beginnings. Commendable poem.

Reading your poetry gives vitality.

Beautiful but very sad write, yet quite lovely and well expressed.

If it wasn't for the white carriage this could easily be the images and symbols for a funeral and not a wedding. The repetition and humor were very characteristic of a wedding - tension and humor. The use of colour and monochrome tones in fabrics and flowers and language was succinct almost cautious like a shy bride not used to being the center of attention. Great ending a farewell and a new door opens with expectation. well done, good poem.