Final Days Comments

''Laying in a pool of blood and tears Dieing isn't so bad at leasts theres no more fears'' a good visual metaphor(.................) .10+

woah, your pretty good i like the way its short, its amazing xx

WOW! ! ! .........Great Poem...It is full of pain....keeeeeeeep writing :) :) :)

this line says all... Dieing isn't so bad at leasts theres nomore fears i like this. its short, and very understandable of the pain that is behind it. GREAT JOB!