Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Final Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Timeless like sleep.
Like laughter, and the sacrificial bleat,
Of those that wallow in defeat,
Unchanged, permanent, infinite and forever,
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Dermot McGarthy
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Clifton Redmond 03 September 2013

Well written, with a very nice rhyme scheme

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Hazel Durham 30 March 2013

Were all on an one way ticket to God's holy presence to hear his wise words and to discover the great mysteries of the afterlife! Beautifully written!

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