Tuesday, October 2, 2007

Final Communication Comments

Rating: 4.0

The rising sun displaces eastward night,
Dispensing cool, sweet shadows by its light,
Then bit by bit the molten gold of day
Grows, glowing, gleaming, sending hence the gray
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Yen Cress
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 March 2008

its so cool...............well written.

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Barbara Haskell 13 January 2008

Yen, your words are beautiful...so warmly descriptive of the positive and so cooly descriptive of the sadness. I could feel the loss within me...Barbara

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Jemarie Ragudo 11 October 2007

You're a gifted poet. I wish I can write like you.

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Linda Weischedel 02 October 2007

Awesome choice of words you used in your poem. Great write! Always, Linda

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