Final Bell Comments

Pungent poem of life hereafter, Nicely conceived and crafty poem.10

A pretty stark and despairing read, you really bare yourself in this, your feelings are those empathic to mine and millions of others but your words transcend them into a beautiful artistic achievement such as this. We are all engulfed in our tombs of desperation, but only few see it like you. Good Work

A poignant write, nicely expressed.

Your endurance is the endurance indeed.I am highly inspired by the poem

Such heartfelt sentiment, may the flags of joy flutter for you!