Tuesday, February 14, 2006
Final Battle Comments
Rating: ★5.0
He was shivering, and there was blood on his wings
I asked him if he was hurt, and how I could help
The angel said, ''The demons vanished like smoke rings
It's not my blood; they flew back to hell, giving a yelp
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Elya Thorn
14 February 2006
Beautiful, beautiful piece! The metaphores are great and so is the imagery, I especially love the ending! Great job! ~~Elya Thorn~~
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7/19/2025 6:04:32 AM # 1.0.0
What drama! ! Is this a chapter from an ongoing story? It jolly well should be - I would love to read it! Regards, Gina.