Filmscript For A Lonely Afternoon Comments

Extremely well thought with an air of brevity.

Indifference. That's the real 'thing' isn't it. And a mood so well expressed and encapsulated. Oh, Michael - another 1st class piece. Is this becoming your usual style? (The catch-the-mood-in-brevity, I mean. Not the first class... that goes without saying) .

The deserted playground a strong indication of emotion, well done... enjoyed the pause in the' memory- go- round, ' and reflected on a time where the pause meant a change of direction.