Fill emptiness of my vessel
With Thy melody and tune.
Fill emptiness of my heart
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Amazing letter of rhythm to the One who understand most..lovely :)
A beautiful prayer, full of melody n tune. I love the soft rhythm of the poem.
Those four opening couplets were perfect. Perfect poetically, emotionally, intellectually. The repetition of fill me was a powerful yearning that took over the hearts and souls and minds of your readers.