Monday, April 25, 2016

Fill My Vessel Comments

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Fill emptiness of my vessel
With Thy melody and tune.

Fill emptiness of my heart
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Susan Williams 09 May 2016

Those four opening couplets were perfect. Perfect poetically, emotionally, intellectually. The repetition of fill me was a powerful yearning that took over the hearts and souls and minds of your readers.

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Unwritten Soul 09 May 2016

Amazing letter of rhythm to the One who understand most..lovely :)

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Nosheen Irfan 26 April 2016

A beautiful prayer, full of melody n tune. I love the soft rhythm of the poem.

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