Tuesday, January 5, 2016

Filing My Mistakes Away Comments

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Leave me alone for a moment.
I need to collect my thoughts.
Some need to be boxed and atticked.
Some need to be re-examined.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Glen Kappy 19 February 2019

hey, suzanne! with school cancelled and more leisure i'm taking some time for your poems. i saw this title—mistakes i can relate to(! ! !) first, i am impressed by the richness, the plethora, of imagery that, for me, makes poetry satisfying. and, of course, i relate to your looking back, to the shifting perspective on oneself as we grow older and (hopefully) wiser, a perspective i refer to in " aging as ascent" and my recent " longevity." good stuff. -glen

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Suzanne Hayasaki

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Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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