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On reading it again - the first two lines of the last verse are the essence of the poem - so finish with them, leave out the comment about the poem being done which spoils it, and think up a first two lines for the last verse. (Said Mr Bossy..)

I agree with what Michael said. It does have a playful sound to it, but is also quite touching at the same time.

I laughed at this, Robert! And it's serious underneath, too. Good.