Fighting With Usual Ones Comments

I don't wanna be a king in usual custom paragon. I don't wanna ascend already used throne. Very interesting lines.

its very diffrent and sometimes a little confusing but very great! xx Tamara

Very different and well written..longing for the unusual. Good job!

Good and fantastic. Looking for especial things in our life gives an other color to it. we should break the cage of our life and look for new and fresh things. well done aung.

Nicely pen! It's really interesting.

Last second stanza is awesome wow...what a poem

routine can be boring, we all like a change and a chalenge, but no matter what you do in life there is a routine in there somewhere, we just have to deal with it, nice write.

Yes...I accept you also have a talent to create a poem that is mixed with rhymes and modern....I like this! Great Job!