Thursday, January 22, 2009

Fighting These Feelings Comments

Rating: 5.0

For such a long time I've wanted you, waited for you
Back then it wasn't what you wanted, but now you do

I can't tell if you're playing, or if what you say is true
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Brianna Trombley
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

You can fight those feelings if you think its worth doing.Nice writes Brianna.

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Matt Burgett 02 February 2009

Very nice...very beautiful......very true

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Little Morning Star 29 January 2009

waiting for someone needs a big patient.. hope you can stand it.. great job..

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Brianna, Lovely couplets.....I appreciate the effort.

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Kimber Harrison 22 January 2009

It's really heartfelt. It speaks.... Really good!

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Dislocated Heart 22 January 2009

All I have to say is follow your heart.... even if its on the left, its always right. Nice poem

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Brianna Trombley

Brianna Trombley

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