Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Fighting In A New War Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walk across this thinning line of life
Overstep it and it’s unto the black abyss
The fury of what the world has finally become
With no one caring what tomorrow brings
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Britney Hogue
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let's all be in god's army to fight this war....a thought provoking poem

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 April 2009

Now this is mighty impressive and I am mighty impressed as a result. I thought you wrote this in a very mature manner. It was delightful to read and I couldn't wait to hear your answer to this problem. Just wonderful! GW62

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Justice For All 05 April 2009

i read most of your poems and they were great...i loved them all...but this poem is the best love&hugs

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Indira Babbellapati 04 April 2009

in spite of seeing so much, u hv nt lost faith...that's the saving grace!

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~ Jon London ~ 03 April 2009

Gives plenty to think about, written well with so much truth and feeling makes this an excellent piece of work.

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