I walk across this thinning line of life
Overstep it and it’s unto the black abyss
The fury of what the world has finally become
With no one caring what tomorrow brings
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Now this is mighty impressive and I am mighty impressed as a result. I thought you wrote this in a very mature manner. It was delightful to read and I couldn't wait to hear your answer to this problem. Just wonderful! GW62
i read most of your poems and they were great...i loved them all...but this poem is the best love&hugs
in spite of seeing so much, u hv nt lost faith...that's the saving grace!
Gives plenty to think about, written well with so much truth and feeling makes this an excellent piece of work.
let's all be in god's army to fight this war....a thought provoking poem