You were real fighter
And sought after
Some readdress for unfortunate people
That was your first crime to inflame the struggle
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well done SATHEESAN RANGORATH11 minutes ago a well written thoughtful poem with apt vocabulary and great imagination. Comment +1
good message Steve Goldsworthy8 minutes ago like the theme of the writing - well structured - last paragraph was very powerful - you brought it home well - good stuff! Comment +1
Form and Style Joey Garcia11 minutes ago Excellent
Nice work sire... It has been awhile I have read your work. It makes me feel harp reeling this... Greetings...! 8 hours ago by Jodekss Gloatkenf to Fighting for honor