Thursday, January 24, 2008

Fighting Against The Time Comments

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Obtain information from you is hard,

And it´s breaking my heart,
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Marly Santos
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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 December 2009

that happens to happen by time and space love when courses through curve of crest and trough, passionate yet poignant too,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Sameer Ahmed 28 June 2009

A very wonderful poem in context of the passing time. Time is indeed one of the most dangerous enemies of the mankind that if once bygone never returns. The feeling of adoration is apparent from the essence of the poem wishing to get the love back and for that you have chosen a new destiny by fighting against time and finding a pragmatic way.....10/10

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a realistic and touching poem.. we may not always win that fight but at least we try..marvelous write

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 December 2008

Beautiful poem.....Fighting against the time is destiny of every lover.

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You capture the all-too-often pain of a one-sided love well in this poem.

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