Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Fighting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everything seems to be a waste
Things are falling apart
Maybe it should just be erased
Its beginning to hurt my heart
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Joscelyn Alderdice
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 14 April 2009

the rhythm is quite astonishing.. the theme spectacular..bravo

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anurag duggal 14 April 2009

you are my favourite poet for ur poem are an easy read...........simplicity is beauty

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Eyan Desir 03 April 2009

I like the flow It was easy reading and I liked the message the poem...tells 8+2=10s

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