Friday, May 23, 2014

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So young why I should die
And parents from heart cry
Under the soil I would lie
Breathe no air I only sigh
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Kassem Oude
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Kim Barney 26 February 2015

Enjoyed this poem very much. Similar in tone, I think, to my RIVER RAN RED.

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David Harris 25 July 2014

well written kassem.

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Colleen Courtney 23 May 2014

Such a sad write. Unfortunately a lot of truth inscribed here. Can almost feel the desperation.

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Gold Trybes 23 May 2014

Really enjoyed reading this poem to the very last word. Flowed like a ryhme.

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Kassem Oude

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