Fight The Good Fight Comments

Hi Tiffany - This is a dilemma we have all faced. V 1 The future looks bleak 'How did I get here' V 2 The cause of the angst in V 1 is an altercation in love. 'It's my fault not his' V 3 Extends the angst 'How long can I last? ' V 4 Is a RESOLVE to regain the lost love. 'I'll regain this love again'. V 5 The resolve is strengthened 'I wont give up this fight'. V 6 Is very positive and the dilemma of V 1 seem to have been resolved. 'The hope is restored - It runs to my core - Thank you dear Lord -It's you my heart beats for. Well structured poem with a positive ending. Love you in Poetry - JOHN

a very positive lovely poem 10

As Lord Krishna said ' When you see the world is against you come and reside within me. I will give you peace.....Well written by a young poet. Keep it up..(9+)

As Lord Krishna said ' When you see the world is against you come and reside within me. I will give you peace.....Well written by a young poet. Keep it up..(9+)

this is a great poem i love it