Saturday, January 20, 2007

Fight Is Over, The Comments

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How many times will it take
Before we see how brittle we are
Why can we still be quick to take arms
When at home we have so much greater fights.
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Alison Smith
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George P. Stasiuk 21 January 2007

Allie - this is a touching, heartfelt eulogy that soars beyond grades or poetic commentary. It is a slice of our collective, certain fate. I only pray that when I am called, I will have earned a poignant and loving dedication to my life that approaches the one you have penned. Only those who make a difference, IMHO, each in their own way, are honored so by those left behind.. Quite clearly, your loved ones who have passed made a difference. May Peace be their journey in eternity. With condolences and warmest regards, George

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Jim Foulk 20 January 2007

very touching heart felt piece of poetry. it digs down deep into the soul, and really touches the heart, niecly written.

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David Harris 20 January 2007

This is sad and also beautiful, showing us how fragile we are. - David

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