Saturday, August 29, 2009

Fight For You (If U Think It Deserves A Different Title Let Me Know) Comments

Rating: 0.0

I wont rest easy until i know your mine again
your the only one i feel something with
i cant move on from you, i cant let you go
i dont want to let you go, i cant set you free
...
Read full text

Brittany Bell
COMMENTS
Shekhar Joshi 09 September 2009

i can feel the desparity element in this poem........and your mad love the person......nicely written...but could have written better....... above average i would say........

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success