Sunday, February 26, 2012

Fig Jam On Toast, White Coffee, Skim Milk, Two Sugars Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Friend I'm great just ask me'
Obviously now that others appreciate superior talent,
Where higher intellect tethers eccentricity
Causing outmoded fair-weather friends empty egos,
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Karen Deeks 14 March 2012

Hello Danny... The first thing that strikes me of this write (and I may be wrong) but the shopping listy title seems to bare a significance... Figs (we say don't give a fig) almost a distrustworthy fruit, (skimmed) milk.. To flit over or be ignored and the two sweetners.... This seems to me a friend or friends flitting off in their own self importance... And the tie up line is such a great punch line... Sock it to um! I say... Bravo for a great grey matter piece... Karen

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Soulful Heart 01 March 2012

That was punched rightly..............good tasty and bitterish savy breakfast........

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