Fifty Eight Years Comments

Tsira is right, those lines are killer..additionally I like, 'small fires on dark nights.'. 'waves if stillness opening' 'words sealed on paper'..so many jewel-fires waiting to be discovered here. Plus, the journey described here is awe inspiring.

'when scars become gifts' ..................................... 'a small bag of dreams left under a child's pillow.' ................................... I think that these precious lines should be underlined.... The truth, they remarkable... ts.

A great poem, as we get older the years seem to get faster. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Evil Rising.