Fifth Fist Comments
Subtle, soft, and slowly spoken
Fragmentary, burned, and broken
Overtures but covert tokens
Aimless words adrift at sea
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Excellent rhythm and imagery. Whatever ugliness man shall make in his ignorance and greed. Nature will relentlessly whipe clean, it is just a matter of time.
for the want of want, magical. I used something similar, yet not, in an essay: 'I love, because I need to.' Cheers, Jerry
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Kelly A wonderful construct. Emotionally powerful. Thanks for putting your work on the site. Denis Joe