Oh, age has come and brought me fifteen years
And perhaps with it,
Joy will come too.
Youth still dances with these years
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stop making me feel oooold. Regardless, nice poem. I'm always afraid to deviate from a rhyme scheme of some sort, but doesn't seem to bother you, in that you make a poem anyway of it. I like the styling.
.....seems that you'veperfected the modern unrhymed verse.....great work dear