Saturday, October 30, 2010

Fifteen Years Comments

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Oh, age has come and brought me fifteen years
And perhaps with it,
Joy will come too.
Youth still dances with these years
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Natasha Kirke
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Yash Shinde 15 March 2014

.....seems that you'veperfected the modern unrhymed verse.....great work dear

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ian McArthur 03 December 2010

stop making me feel oooold. Regardless, nice poem. I'm always afraid to deviate from a rhyme scheme of some sort, but doesn't seem to bother you, in that you make a poem anyway of it. I like the styling.

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