Friday, May 9, 2008

Fieldtrip Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was graduating in high school,
Our educational field trip was cool.
It was my first time to travel afar,
With classmates joyriding in a car.
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Ema Nekaf 20 June 2008

It's akwardly blunt! I love it!

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Ency Bearis 22 May 2008

Marvin is that coincidence of the flat tire or with consent to happen? I can feel what happened....ayos pare...biro lang. A -10.

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Original Unknown Girl 21 May 2008

What a serendipitous happening! The tyres being blown, I mean! Don't agree with David, clearly you both wanted it.... wonderful penning of events here Marvin. HG: -) xx

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David Desantis 21 May 2008

hahah that's a pretty sweet first time bro......lucky that you broke down.....he women are such hussies

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Melvin Banggollay 21 May 2008

ha ha ha dear brother another wonderful poem Its full of fun and wonderful scenes a 10 for that erectible poems. thanks, melvin

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Herbert Nehrlich1 09 May 2008

Marvin I have always liked your lack of inhibition and openness. This is an example of how poetry ought to read. H

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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