Fields Of Green Velvet Comments
Lay me down gently in fields of green velvet
Resting beneath the blue gossamer sky
Where I may gaze upon clouds of white cotton
Shimmering dragonflies floating on by
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Beautiful words in a Field of Green velvet. your writing is always extremely graceful
Breathtaking poem. the description is so vivid that the readers can feel that we are there with you.
Away from the fever and the fret of here and now...Really ecstatic....isn't it?
The reader certainly takes a trip of imagination to enjoy the description. enjoyed reading.
Wow Valerie fields of green Valerie must be a beautiful place to lie down. Your use of vivid colors really adds a sense of lightness and is very refreshing. I would like to relax like that. Nice.
the imagery in this poem is beautiful Makes me want to lie down in fields of green velvet. love the write.
Fields of green velvet below and a blue gossamer sky above! What a lovely place to rest, free from all worry, heartache and care! Simply lovely! !
I love this one Ruth. It has a very musical feel to it. If you don't mind, could I try setting it to a tune?
A serene and peaceful write with the comfort and splendour of nature's fields of green velvet! So beautiful Val!
A faultless poem and concept, an offering to ponder and accept, peace and serenity painted perfectly.
Splendid in lyrical charm and expressive of love unbound.. It is a poem that can be one of the best 10 by you and so I am giving a clean 10 out of 10.
Well, well, well, Didn't know you were an Enchantress, as well. This poem-painting has fascinated me, it's beauty, description, pictorial magic thru words. I could even smell the pine- scented air, Delightfully travelled, not paying our fare. A Gem of a poem, thank you
A beautiful poem, you make it sound such a beautiful place to be.
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7/30/2025 1:56:40 PM # 1.0.0
Your beautiful, descriptive words of such beauty has me drifting there with you. I esp. loved your last stanza, being able to let go of all your cares~ if one dares! A very beautifully written poem, indeed. You always have what another does need.