Thursday, September 3, 2015

Fields Of Corn (Triolet) Comments

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I walk in loneliness through fields of corn
Caressing the corn with my hand as I stroll
Soft wind makes sway in the early morn
I walk in loneliness through fields of corn
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David Wood
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Rahman Henry 04 September 2015

Beautiful and rhymed. I enjoyed reading the work.

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Kelly Kurt 03 September 2015

This form seems to fit your style, David. Nicely done.

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Pijush Biswas 03 September 2015

A beautiful poem, experience of walking in loneliness through fields of corn is vivid, good rhymed, thanks for sharing

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