Sunday, April 23, 2017

Field Of Meadow And Heart Of Shield Comments

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Shutting my eye lids I see a fluttering meadow
Disrupted by the noisy shutters hitting the window
I open my portals and my pupils stare out at the sun
Imprinting me with eternal darkness because I am dumb
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Jeremy Willson
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 April 2017

Fluttering meadow amazes mind shuttering window. Stare out at the sun looking in to faith of flower you feel your imagination of expression. Very thoughtful imagery this poem carries. This is definitely wonderful sharing.10

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Jeremy Willson 24 April 2017

Thank You very much I appreciate the read and comment! :)

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