Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Field. Comments

Rating: 4.3

Arms in gentle lock,
floating like dusty chalk

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Christopher Holmberg
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Noel Horlanda 11 October 2009

Field...I was looking for this, the title I mean. Is there a relation or no relation to the theme? Only the author could answer the quest. However, I like the thought and how it was written. The lines were honest and sincere. Thanks, mate and cheers.

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Afzal Shauq 09 October 2009

he sky stares as the brush trinkles through, caught on a knot, to engage the view. Sailing like the star headed eyes, passage in gentle lock, then swiftly alligned. good task and the verses of poem are sweetly done and the meaningful way of your expression is enough satisfactory and good enough..liked it..and let me say well done..10/10

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Christopher Holmberg

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