Saturday, September 23, 2017

Fidget Spinners Comments

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I see my grandchildren all times
never without a fidget spinner
whether it's the dining table
or it's their soft and hot bed.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Oratile Diratsagae 11 May 2018

I believe you told it from and to the heart...god bless

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Indira Renganathan 05 October 2017

What a lovely poem Akhtar...same thing is going on in my house also with my grand daughter....this poem excites me as much as the fidget spinners....thanks for sharing

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Valsa George 24 September 2017

Grand children bring a lot of joy to aged grand parents! They are ready to do anything for them, even vacate their place for the younger ones to flourish in life....! This bond between these two age groups is astonishingly so strong and intact. But unfortunately when grandchildren grow up, the picture may change, but the attitude of the grannies are not likely to undergo any change....! Beautiful poem where I see a grandfather and grandmother gloating over their children's children!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2017

A grandfather and grandmother's universe is united with grandchildren with emotion, love, thought and affection around home. Still sometimes dilemma comes in mind and confusion follows with difficulties. Sum is solved correctly with satisfaction. Let them dance for a longer time with spinning minds for God. Brilliant and excellent poem is shared here...10

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