Fidelity Of Love Comments

Love is a beautiful thing and so is your poem

the last line is outstanding 'love dwell in us so live for love'. the idea really thrilled me and reminded me of my love I have lost. i still love her and perhaps i live for her. enjoyed it.

emotions personified...the tone and thought behind your poem are marvelous!

It is highly educative and inspiring. i really enjoyed the tone of the poem. Good work. Great message!

A truly beautiful poem, one of the best I've read in a while. I like your style and I hope you continue to write beautiful poems like this one.

The collision of souls could entwined a feeling if it a space to attached together...sounds like two beats be one rhythm..keep it more writing to come_Unwritten Soul

Great poem and passionate write i must say.Amazing choice of words here.

The simplicity of this poem makes it the beauty that it is. The imagery is vivid and I can see two people sitting on the moon in a throne as the personified stars marvel at their beauty that transcends over the world and bring happiness and love to mankind as seen in your description of Romeo and Juliet. All in all, a great piece!

Nice poem it truely speaks bout love and just good imagery. I rate it a 10 good job