Tuesday, October 18, 2016

Fidelity Comments

Rating: 4.3

My Lord!
I do not plea guilty.
as a vassal my fealty,
you know better than me.
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Akhtar Jawad
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M Asim Nehal 20 October 2016

Super poem.......Things to ponder on... The girl and the slave came closer and closer, and they are now in love with each other. My mutiny is against your injustice, but I cannot challenge fidelity of mighty nature.

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Rajnish Manga 18 October 2016

Very poignant and thought provoking. The is also a tacit commentary on the social evil of child marriage and child abuse. Thanks for sharing.

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Khalid Saifullah 18 October 2016

Thoughtful and touching.........................................................................

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