Thursday, January 1, 2004

Fidelis Comments

Rating: 3.2

You have taken back the promise
That you spoke so long ago;
Taken back the heart you gave me-
I must even let it go.
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Adelaide Anne Procter
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Susan Williams 12 November 2015

Unlike Nehal, I fail to find this poem amusing. It is sheer pain to a compassionate heart to see someone's proffer of fidelity treated so cheaply.

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

Amusing poem..........................Loved it

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