Monday, March 3, 2008

Fidelis Vernula Comments

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He cast his heart into the sea
and said, 'If you want my love,
you must fish for my heart.'
And I replied, 'I shall sacrifice
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Melissa Hurst
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Chuck Sanford 25 August 2008

This is the third poem of yours I've read, and the third I really like. You seem to have a very intriguingly dark and sexual view of love.

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Andrew Basore 03 March 2008

Very Interesting, Indeed. If you dont mind me asking, does it end well?

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