The mayflies ride the glides in slow procession
above the burbling eddies' low percussion;
their up-wings test the airs and dance in twitches.
His toe-taps and his fiddle-notes commingle,
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The images are clear in the readers mind as he sways to the rhythm and flow of the poem Great work
Oh, heck, I should just save myself some work and time and give all your poetry a blanket of starry-eyed 10's and a place on the top shelf of my fav list. You are a remarkable word smith. totally awesomely remarkable.
Thanks, Susan. You are very gracious. Thanks very much for reading and being so appreciative!