Fiction Comments

This is very relateble. Loved every bit of it. Good expressions and the theme captured with very minimal words. Excellent. tfs 0/10

ooh, really good, I like how you explained how you feel and then are all 'but it's not really mine' and tie it to the title 'fiction' really cleaver. :)

Wonderful way of self-expression.Proves another genre of poetry in your verses as it does in stories and more so in less consumed time to grasp the ideas beneath.