Vitality consumed
Body feels droopy
It is a mind seizure
Makes you loopy.
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A very true to life poem, Sameer. Adore the language you choose, as always :) Best wishes. A.
This is how I feel each day after work.. My life is a Fiasco this I know Woderfull poem
Good one Sameer. It's like when we run out of steam in the afternoon after a frantic busy day. I love the word 'loopy'. 10 Karin Anderson
The way we think determines how we feel, the way we feel can determine how we think. Wise thinking. Bob Blackwell
We all have days like this. You are in good company, Sameer. 10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra
oh So thats my problem Doctor Sameer... Like it very much!
truth of knight in a very shinning armor of your thought....splendid as its hover in my mind....a poem switch on as medicine of the dream fantastic my friend….Gods bless... a10+++
oops...! did it again meaningful and resides at the level of the reader... cheers
this is sort of amusing read... bro.. i liked this one... with lvs shan