Thursday, February 27, 2014

Few Wishes! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Very few wishes I was expecting
May be of few words that I longed to hear today.

May be the flowers bloomed were less today
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 April 2014

Forget the wishes Forget the memories.. lovely lines....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 March 2014

After all the wishes are just made of few words., , nice one...10 if wishes had wings i could send then in ring which could have aired music while opening its wraps.............

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Kanav Justa 04 March 2014

May be the flowers bloomed were less today May be the sunrays didn’t hug me today. May be the warmth breeze forgot to kiss me today., , , , nice lines, , , ,

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 March 2014

A thing to become a memory has to be a wish first............Geetha.......unless wishes are entertained we can not move forward.............they are like hopes fuelling lives towards goal......very well composed....loved it

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Valsa George 01 March 2014

Todays wishes whether fulfilled or not will become yesterday's memories! But without beautiful wishes, life will become morose and dull! So keep sweet wishes for tomorrow and wait for them to be materialised! If not realized, accept it! Sweet write, Geetha!

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Rajesh Thankappan 28 February 2014

Every wishes will be faded One day to become a few memories. Nicely said since our present fades into the background and they become twinkling memories. And as you rightly say, true wishes should be backed by true intends.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 February 2014

Wishes carry sense only when loaded with love. Nicely said. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar

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