A few minutes in the dark.
What kind of dark?
No light shining?
Depression?
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Your poem can be a good material for class discussion because it can relate to everyone in many ways. It's quite intriguing.
Very cool, Natalie :) Describes very well where I am at this point in my life. Maybe where a lot of people are, right now, at this point in their lives. Like the other comment, yes, I think many people could relate to it.